PaulClover

I really liked this poem :) Your use of language is incredibly well-developed, in my opinion. The only thing that gets me is the hey-hey-hey part. It sounds more like ...

You have no reason to not be proud of this poem. It's actually quite good. I'm not much of a poetry buff, but I really did enjoy this Two thumbs ...

I really liked this. Your style is quite good and effective :) A little on the short side though, but it works well here and gets right to the point. ...

This was a really neat story, and I liked how you emphasized how horrible and damned the protagonist was. To hell with likable people :) It was almost like a ...

This is a really neat start to what I expect will be an incredible story. I liked the vagueness of the surroundings and characters, though I do hope that you ...

Great, now I'm sad. And I mean that in the best possible way. This story was incredibly well-written. It honestly felt like it was told from the point of view ...

I really dug this. It's short, sweet and it perfectly covers the experience of losing one's internet connection. The cool thing is you could take out that last line and ...

First, I want you to know that - as of fifteen seconds ago when I finished reading this - you are now officially my hero. Second, your writing is really ...