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Paul here! but when she transferred into my class at the semester It should be "at the start of the semester." The way it is, it doesn't really make any ...

Paul here! I finally decided to procrastinate doing schoolwork get back into the habit of doing some reviews! I really liked this piece. It felt poignant, and sad, honest somehow. ...

Paul here! Really digging the writing style here. I know this has been said over and over again in the comments, but "refreshing" is the first word that comes to ...

Paul here! (cue dramatic music) I really liked the writing here, which is good because they're really isn't that much in the way of plot besides building up the two ...

Paul here! This was a neat story, though I didn't love it as much as I liked it, if that makes any sense. I'll go ahead and get the critique ...

Paul here! First off, I truly loved the story here. The idea of a dentist lured into a castle of vampires is hilariously ironic, and the generally playful tone helped ...

Paul here! This was incredibly well-written. In the way of grammar, there's really nothing I can recommend other than changing the capitalization in the title to "The Sea" instead of ...

Paul here! Kafka, I do believe you have outdone yourself in the weird factor :) And yes, that is most certainly a compliment. The "Puppeteer" was disorienting, especially with the ...

Paul here for review! This story is a lot like an apple pie. It's sweet (almost a little too sweet), warm and you feel a mixture of happiness and sadness ...

Paul here! Oh, and (forgive my flamboyancy), but love, love, love! This is great! I've always had a thing for biblical mythology, especially concerning the Fall of Heaven and the ...

Paul here! My view is pretty much the same as everyone else's. I would introduce maybe three or four characters in this first chapter, but more than that and it ...

Paul here! Usually when I review stories on this site, I'm too busy looking for errors and building up constructive criticisms to really enjoy the the narratives. This was different. ...

I'm really liking this story :) It reads kind of like a new fairy tale, which is pretty much what you were going for, so mission accomplished sir *salutes* The ...

Paul here! Haven't reviewed anything in a while, so forgive me if I'm a little rusty ;) Just wanted to say that this is awesome as always :D This prologue ...

Paul here :) Ready to return the "review favor" or something like that First and foremost, I love the way you start this off. It sets a tone and creates ...