PatriciaTina

Hey there! I'm here to critique your story! I don't have much to say that hasn't already been said, but I'll still go through it for you. First, I'd like ...

Hi there! I'm Trish. I just wanted to let you know that this is the part of the site where you can post your writing, and get people to review ...

Hey there! I see you're new here. First, I'd just like to make sure you're aware of the 3:1 ratio. This means that for every one thing you post up ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! I guess I'm the first one to review your story; but before I do that, I would just like to remind you of the 3:1 ...

Hey! I see you're a new member! Why don't you pop on down to the welcome boards and introduce yourself? I'm Kitty by the way. Just to let you know ...

Well, hi there! I've come to review your piece of writing! Beware though, I'm a bit of a nit-picker! But now, let's get on with the review... This story has ...

I loved it! Oh my gosh I laughed so hard! Now you've made me want to watch Pirate of the Carribean... Again! The only thing was that all the caps ...

Hey! I just got your message requesting a critique and here I am! As I said in my reply though, I'm not really good at these types of critiques so ...

Hey-ya! I really like this story, and I can't wait to read more. It seems to grip the reader well, and leaves us wanting to know what happens next. I ...

Hey! I really think that this story has a lot of potential and I can't wait to read more! In a lot of the stories I read I find that ...

I loved this! Even though Twilight used to be my favorite book, I'm really starting to see why people hate those books so much. But, though this was absolutely hilarious, ...

First I would just like to say that I think this poem has tons of potential. I am poems are my favorite type of poem, and I think you're off ...

Hey! Here's your requested review. I'll try not to be too harsh, but I tend to nit-pick, so that's just a warning. :lol: Anyways, on with the review! After the ...

Hi! I like your idea, a boy going to a boarding school, but I find that the writing lacks descriptiveness. I would try describing his actions, instead of just listing ...

Oh my! I love this story! It's so awesomely awesome! Hehe. I can say awesome explicitly too! But, due to my awesome nit-picking abilities, I was able to awesomely find ...