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Very interesting poem you have here! I did enjoy it. However, I would like to point out some things. "Rain freckles on the gap-tooth sidewalk" threw me off a little. ...

Excellent! a simple format and wording, but still charming. I love poems that do that. It had power and really had emotion in it, which any reader would appreciate. It ...

This was a very good poem. Because of it's simple structure, there isn't any rhythm breaks or rhyming mistakes. It was simple and sweet, which gives it a little charm. ...

What a nice poem! It had a rather nice flow and rhythm in it, and there weren't any notable mistakes. Being a music lover myself, I enjoy seeing poems like ...

I liked this one. It was short and sweet, and had a rather strong message in it. I must admit, the subject matter was a little hard to decipher, but ...

This was very good, and carried a rather nice little message. Especially in that last line. However, there were a couple of things you can improve on. In the second ...