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Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1) - Chapter 21
Hello again, jamgalloway, PastelSlushie here for review number 38 for #RevMo! Let's get right into it! Not much of criticism - but I see this chapter is a bit longer ...
Sep 23, 2017 -
Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1) - Chapter 19 & 20
Hello again, jamgalloway, PastelSlushie here for review number 37 for #RevMo! Let's get right into it! This review is going to shorter than the others usually are, so my apologizes ...
Sep 21, 2017 -
Re: Just a Fan
Hello, taytay20016, PastelSlushie here for review number 36 for #RevMo! Let's get right into it! Also, welcome to YWS! It's great to see you've already posted something. I'm going to ...
Sep 20, 2017 -
Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1) - Chapter 18
Hello again, jamgalloway, PastelSlushie here for review number 35 for #RevMo! Let's get right into it! Issues/Nitpicks) I feel you could tone down a bit when describing the hospital setting. ...
Sep 19, 2017 -
Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1) - Chapter 17
Hello again, jamgalloway, PastelSlushie here for review number 34 for #RevMo! Let's get right into it! Issues/Nitpicks) I feel in the beginning of this chapter where we're reading the flashback ...
Sep 19, 2017 -
Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1) - Chapter 14, 15, & 16
Hello again, jamgalloway, PastelSlushie here for review number 33 for #RevMo! Let's get right into it! Issues/Nitpicks) Julia and Logan's mom seems pretty bland right now. She is probably trying ...
Sep 18, 2017 -
Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1) - Chapter 12 & 13
Hello again, jamgalloway, PastelSlushie here for review number 32 for #RevMo! Let's get right into it! Issues/Nitpicks) I find it odd that Julia is NOW going to look for her ...
Sep 17, 2017 -
Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1) - Chapter 11
Hello again, jamgalloway, PastelSlushie here for review number 31 for #RevMo! Let's get right into it! Issues/Nitpicks) I feel some work on Logan as a character could help a lot. ...
Sep 17, 2017 -
Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1) - Chapter 10
Hello again, jamgalloway, PastelSlushie here for review number 30 for #RevMo! Let's get right into it! Okay, first off, was that cliffhanger even necessary. Issues/Nitpicks) I feel Julia is WAY ...
Sep 17, 2017 -
Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1) - Chapter 8 & 9
Hello again, jamgalloway, PastelSlushie here for review number 29 for #RevMo! Let's get right into it! Issues/Nitpicks) My only complaint about these chapters is at the end of chapter 9 ...
Sep 16, 2017 -
Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1) - Chapter 6 & 7
Hello again, jamgalloway, PastelSlushie here for review number 28 for #RevMo! Let's get right into it! Issues/Nitpicks) In the last paragraph, I feel you've repeated the fact that Julia is ...
Sep 16, 2017 -
Re: Climate Change & Me
Hello, FalconryGirl9086, PastelSlushie here for review number 27 for #RevMo! Let's get right into it! Issues/Nitpicks) I really can't find anything to say here, the only thing I can point ...
Sep 16, 2017 -
Re: Trailing Stardust
Hello, AliceinBluue, PastelSlushie here for review 26 for #RevMo! Let's get right into it! Also, welcome to YWS! It's great to see you've already posted something. Issues/Nitpicks) I feel there ...
Sep 15, 2017 -
Re: Humanity Rising
Hello, AgonAub, PastelSlushie here for review 25 for #RevMo! Let's get right into it! Also, a day late welcome to YWS! It's great to see you've already posted something. Issues/Nitpicks) ...
Sep 14, 2017 -
Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1) - Chapter 5
Hello again, jamgalloway, PastelSlushie here for review 24 for #RevMo! Let's get right into it! Issues) This isn't a big issue, but I would like to talk about the pacing ...
Sep 14, 2017