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Lol no you don't seem snobbish. I'm prolly the snobby one ;) Including religion here is interesting, but really risky. Meh. Idk... Is it important to the plot line?? If ...

Oh that's cool. I get it :P well then feel free to give up any time

Aw thank you! I'm glad I'm not the only nerd out there :P

Try saying that 10 times fast. Lol I can't...

Question on the semicolon thing. I was trying to use "A stressful, straining horde" as an appositive of disappointment. So still a semicolon? It's not a big deal, but should ...

Well that's ok that you think that. I think you're right in a way. But it's kinda funny that I wrote this after I got a C. I wasn't that ...

Try redeem.

I didn't even see this reply till now *shoots notifications tab* I sorta just made up that phrase lol. It's pretty much show don't tell. But showing still really isn't ...

Oh I forgot. Problem!! Artemis calls people "princess" too. Sedna should have it all to herself or not use it at all. It's too close and confusing.

Oh ok. ;) Well sleep is your best friend! It helps keep your mind clear which can help you as you write. I'm in the US too. (But shh! Don't ...

Don't sweat it lol. What country are you from? Is it a different time zone? Anyway, get some sleep :) Lol.

Weak spots?? You said that before? I don't remember, could you remind me what ya mean?

Nice! Lol I love shipping...

Yeah I understand. Just thinking out loud in my review.. :P

Lol. Sorry wrong account.... I feel stupid now...