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  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: Regret But No Repentence

    Thanks Cody! Yeah I understand the feel concept. Idk exactly how to fix that tho. Thanks again for the review!!!

    Jul 9, 2015
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: Regret But No Repentence

    Thank you 21g!!! I didn't think I had a good writing style, so that was really sweet of you. Wording is hard and it drives me crazy in other people's ...

    Jul 9, 2015
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: Regret But No Repentence

    Thanks for the review!!! The writer of the journal and the reader of it are brothers. I was hoping that I made that clear but idk I guess not. The ...

    Jul 9, 2015
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: Regret But No Repentence

    Thank you so much! That review was perfect, teach me your secrets!!! I appreciate all that you said, especially about the dates and time. I didn't really know what time ...

    Jul 9, 2015
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: Regret But No Repentence

    Thank you so much jasper!! I appreciate all that you pointed out and agree with you. I know it needs work and I'm not the best writer. I'm not a ...

    Jul 9, 2015
  • Other » Realistic, Culture Re: #Homophobe

    Don't worry, dragonf. One day every knee will bow and every voice will proclaim that Jesus Christ is Lord. Every person on this website will one day praise His name. ...

    Jun 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Core Cities Chapter Four

    Aw you guys haven't posted a new chapter in forever :( I miss it....

    Jun 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 30: The Roof

    Ooooh tell me the dream!! The Hunter one of course. Will I hate you or the Lucien people? Because Hunter and Billie are made for each other. Like it's a ...

    Dec 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 31: The Return

    Ahh why are you so good?! Not fair. ;) This is getting intense. Can't wait to finish it and start reviewing!!!

    Nov 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Other Re: A Nerd's Lament

    No don't worry about it. You're all good. XD

    Oct 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Other Re: A Nerd's Lament

    Thanks!! Yeah the grammar is wrong but I don't really care. Is that bad? If it was a story it would be bad but it's a poem. And it's not ...

    Oct 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: A Lost Star

    Omw thank you this was soo helpful!!! I love your reviews, just saying. Like I read some of them on review day and you're so good at it. Thank you, ...

    Oct 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: A Lost Star

    Thanks!! Cute avatar!!

    Oct 28, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: A Lost Star

    Thank you!! Yeah I love that part too! And yep typo. Ugh. Haha :)

    Oct 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: A Lost Star

    Thanks!!! Yeah I agree with the rhyme thing. I was having problems with the loose/full rhyme patterns and got tired of dealing with it lol. But yeah you're right XD

    Oct 24, 2014


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