Passion

WOW. You did really good. I mean this was really good. How'd you do that? That was no free writing. Even I don't come up with things that cool. You ...

that's really good.

nice and it's really cool. don't need any changes to me, but my poems do need help, so if by chance can you check 'em out?

nice. and that's what'd happen to me.

My heart is heavy My head is light My eyes are wide My mouth is thin. i know how that feels. because i feel it too.

A life without whom? I've become curious. my life without someone like a friend, would be a normal life because i don't have any. So I'll just go with those ...

I actually think the same way. Because when I thought that I was in love I was wrong. I was so wrong that I ended up getting hurt. Love is ...

I've felt that way once. I might hav been stupid because the guy only wanted me for my body, but to me that was true love. I wanted him and ...

Me too. I've been there and still am.

that is so cool. you're very creative. and imaginative.

I agree.

I really like the poem. I don't know how to explain it, but I can tell you it was beautiful. Not in the happy fake poem kind of way.