ParisCarter

Oh that's a good one about the word choice, I had this one sitting in my edit folder since May, and have been fixing it ever since. The language comes ...

I know this looks like a jumbled mess, but when I was in the Publishing Center it wouldn't let me add the spaces in between each stanza. I'm sorry it ...

Thank you, I an glad you enjoyed my poem so much.

Thank you so much, I'm not to good at punctuation and sentence structures, but I'm learning. I just went back and edited out a lot of other unnecessary words. Thanks!

Thank you! Your comment got my brain thinking and now I'm starting to answer some of your questions, and I can see myself filling in the holes by editing this ...