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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Red Fox, Snowy Day - Haiku

    this haiku made me think a little. I had to read it a few times to actually figure out it was talking about a fox. (besides the giveway title). I ...

    Jan 4, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Among The Weak

    This was very fun and mysterious to read. At first i was thinking, "whats coming after her?" and then the message at the end was very unanticipated. I liked this ...

    Jan 4, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: One by One (prologue)

    hmmm this was interesting for me to read. I dont quite get what's going on. Is it just a chat about something random or does it have a greater meaning? ...

    Jan 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Finally

    hey, i liked this poem!! out of five, i give it a four. it wasn't very deep but it was insightful. i normally dont do suggestions for the whole thing ...

    Jan 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Lingering soul

    THREE WORDS: THIS WAS AMAZING!! yess i loved this. keep it up. the day has stopped,so useless I feel,I don't have the power to help.The selfishness of us humans doesn't ...

    Jan 3, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: Lilly Evans' diary 10

    hmm i liked this. was this based off of harry potter? who is Lilly Evans? i'm sorry, I haven't read the books at all. this wasn't very deep. it seemed ...

    Jan 3, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Catch a Shooting star

    wow i liked this a lot! (: it was really good. it was deep and descriptive and maybe you could add more about what happened before she ascended into heaven ...

    Jan 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Broken Table

    whoa, i thought this was very interesting. I dont quite understand what a "broken table" is, well, i didnt know if there was a greater meaning. this poem seemed like ...

    Jan 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: maybe it's just me

    i really liked the way this poem flowed. i liked the whole "lonliness" thing since it fit when eventually the main character was pulled out of the slump. i have ...

    Jan 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: What we are

    We must be something like stars,or a starburst. Blinking and growinguntil we tear ourselves apartso much faster then we should.Some would admire us from afar,streamlined us through a telescopebefore w

    Jan 2, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Religious Duty

    How does someone come up with things like this? I really liked this. At first when i read the beginning i was thinking, "Oh great, another story about rejection." but ...

    Jan 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Reflection

    Just as I am about to give in, to let go, and stop fighting,I see light. More radiant and incandescent than the light of the world. Your light guides me.Your ...

    Jan 2, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Ashes To Ashes

    my names Nessa, haaha anyways, Wow, this is really deep. I immediately fell in love with this as soon as i read it. Idk how the points/rating or whatever works ...

    Jan 2, 2011


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