PaperNessa

I liked this poem because it sounded cold-hearted, saddening, hardening, and lonely. (well, that's the why I interpreted it). I enjoyed reading. I didn't see any mistakes. It was well ...

hmm this was very confusing. I didn't understand but I read this a few times and began to put together my interpretation of the poem. I liked it; it was ...

Hmm you seem like a nice guy. I liked this... It was sweet, beautiful, and touching. The similies were amazing. Even though some of the poem was repetive, it proved ...

Hmm I thought this was a very interesting poem. It explained a lot of things without saying much. Each line interested me more about the two people. The girl, of ...

AWW this was sooo cute!! haaha i loved this! it was great. out of five, i give it a four! keep writing. however, these are my suggestions but it's pretty ...

errmmm why would you even put this on YWS ? but haha no just kidding! (: it was cute and VERY, VERY, VERY random. i mean - cheese? maybe you ...

Wow this was interesting/exciting but confusing/strange at the same time. I enjoyed reading! keep it up! i liked it but is there a plot? the only thing i had understanding ...

I thought this was interesting. This was chapter 1, and this is the first i have read of this (if its a novel/novella/short story). In the beginning it is very ...

hmm... wow this was deeper than i expected. haaha, i liked it. A LOT. rating out of five: four. here are my suggestions: Words, terrible words, flashed in my mind ...

AWESOME, i loved this. it was great. It wasn't every descriptive (but who cares, right?) rating out of five: four. this was mysterious and very strange in a good way. ...

hmm this was different.

WWWOOOWWW. I LIKED THIS A LOT! haaha, anyways i liked the ending the best, these are my suggestions: Your embrace warms me from the ravaging wind, but it doesn’t do ...

I like this a lot. out of five it give it a four. (: good job keep writing!! there weren't many mistakes grammar wise; which was good but only one ...

this was good. i enjoyed reading it... not many mistakes: Dear Connor, We’ve argued about many things in the past. They’re stupid things; things that don’t even mean anything to ...

i liked this. i thought it was interesting. the way the main character (sorry i forgot her name) was stealing and she was also having visions of her past by ...