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Thank you. :)

The thing I really adore about your poems is that you manage to maintain a perfect balance between understanding and uncertainty - I can read the poem about ten times ...

Hello again, AlfonsoFernandez. I just want to let you know that I've read the piece (it's great) and I'm going to review it later - I don't have time at ...

Thank you. Don't get the impression that I'm supportive of stealing or shoplifting - I just like to write as characters with views very different from my own; I find ...

That was...God. That last sentence. Brilliant. I don't normally read poetry, but that was so cleverly, eerily done. Fantastic.

Just to let you guys know, I have taken your criticisms on board and edited the big document of my work, but I haven't actually edited this one, just because ...

Cheers. ;)

This was excellent. I think the comments before me have outlined the nitpicks, but I have to say that I absolutely loved this. Your organisation and arrangement of the passage ...

Thaaaank youuu! I'll sort out the nitpicks and post the next chapter in two parts. Cheers for the feedback. ;)

Thanks, Mlawa! ;)

Thank you! Chapter one is up, just so you know. :D

Here to help. :)

Thank you. :) I really worked hard on the tone of that passage, I've been editing it for ages.

I really like this! You don't give much away, but there are some real gems in this piece. Your description is lovely - light, subtle, and not overdone. Your varied ...

Thank you! :D I will do. :)