Panikos

Hi, BlueAfrica. Happy Review Day! Usual drill: small comments, overall thoughts, suggested changes in blue. Small Comments The rain had finally stopped, long after they’d all fallen asleep, and now,

Hi, Flumadiddle! Pan finally back to review. Sorry it's taken me so long - busy times at the minute. I'll try to be extra-thorough to make up for the wait. ...

Hi, TheLeakyPen! Pan here to review. Let's dive straight into the nitpicks. Blue text = suggested changes. Nitpicks I can sense that my eyes are glistening with the sparkle Dad ...

Hi, BlueAfrica! Back again to review. I'll get straight to it this time. Small Comments “Perhaps I had better get back to bed,” Kiernan says. “It’s so interesting to see ...

Hi, BlueAfrica! Pan here to review. I've been silently reading this story over the last two weeks or so, and I thought I'd step in to start reviewing once the ...

Hiya, Sergeant Rosie! I'm back again for round two. Let's get straight to it. Nitpicks Jean and Annalise make their way around several half-awake bodies. Jean looks around proudly. “What ...

Hi, TheBlueCat! Pan here for a quick review. I'll point out my nitpicks as I read and close with some general thoughts. Let's get to it! Nitpicks My mom, my ...

Hi, Flumaddle. Round six! It's great that you're cranking these out so quickly. Let's get straight to the nitpicks, which I'll point out as I go along. Nitpicks J was ...

Hi, Little. Pan finally here to review. Let's get straight to it. Nitpicks from his bed room 'Bedroom' is one word. close the gate to his families home Remember apostrophes ...

Hi, Kimball! Pan here for a quick review. Seeing as there are so many recurrent errors in this, I'm not going to go through it for nitpicks. I don't think ...

Hi, UnSocialCactus! Pan here to review. I'll be taking the perspective of an agnostic on this, so it's a nice balance to TheBlueCat who is also a Christian. I like ...

Hiya, kman134! It's great to see you posting again. Let's get straight to the nitpicks. Nitpicks The mansion was what I got in my grandfather’s will and now I have ...

Hiya, Tuesday. Pan here for a quick review. I'm going to point out little comments and nitpicks as I read then close with some overall thoughts. Let's get to it! ...

Hi, Cub! Pan here for a quick review. This is really polished so I don't have many nitpicks, but there were a few things that I think you could tweak. ...

Yo, Flumadiddle. Back again for round five. Let's do this *cracks knuckles*. Nitpicks "So, what your telling me Nat 1) 'You're', not 'your'. Get into the habit of asking yourself ...