Panikos

Hiii, Querencia! Pan dropping in for another review. "I can't believe that she just flirted with you for a few minutes and you agreed to go to homecoming with her! ...

Hi, Lightsong! Pan dropping in for a review. Let's get to it. Small Comments ‘Whatever it’s thinking, I’m pretty sure it’s bad,’ Aleveri said, looking around her. ' We’ve known ...

Hiya, BlueAfrica. Pan dropping in for a quick review. Small Comments His fellow guard was still out cold, sprawled several feet away but with a jacket now bundled under his ...

Hi, DemonGoddess (and Flumadiddle)! Pan dropping in for a quick review to help you shimmy this out of the Green Room. I'm just going to work through it chronologically and ...

Hi, Waddlers. Pan dropping in to boot this out of the Green Room for good. I'm going to take the piece chronologically and break down my thoughts on it as ...

Hi, jimss23! Pan dropping in for a quick review. Obviously this has been kicking around in the Green Room for quite some time, which I'd guess is because reviewers (unfortunately) ...

Hi, lelu! This has been knocking around in the Green Room for quite some time, so I thought I'd swoop in and give it a critique. I haven't read any ...

Hi, Flumadiddle. Sorry it's taken me a while to get to this. As usual, I'll put small grammar/expression changes in blue . I'm probably not going to comment on punctuation ...

Hi, Querencia! Pan dropping in for another quick review. Finally, she came up to him and leaned against his desk, looking like she'd only just spotted him. She was wearing ...

Hii, Querencia. Pan back again for another review. "Well, perhaps that isn't exactly the best way to put it," Henry reconsidered. "There's only the one shop, and I suppose it ...

Hi, HollyM64. Pan dropping in for a quick review. I'm afraid I've not read the first chapter or the prologue of this story, but hopefully I can still give you ...

Hi, Murphy2493. Pan dropping in for a quick review. I haven't read the previous chapters, but this has been kicking around in the green room for a long time so ...

Hi, Mea. Sorry it's taken me a few days to get to this. As I mentioned, I won't get too nitpicky with this review; instead, I'm just going to work ...

Hi, Querencia! Pan dropping in for another review. This one's probably going to be pretty short as I feel like the other reviewers have basically hit the nail on the ...

Hi, Slobst! Pan dropping in for another review. I'm going to work through this chronologically and give you my thoughts, then round off at the end of each scene with ...