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Re: Chapter 19.2: Gael
Hi, Lightsong! I'm scrambling to keep up with reviews again, but I thought I'd get to your novel first. I want to find out what the deal is with this ...
Jul 25, 2018 -
Re: The Equator in Zhulong 1.3
Hi, pompadour! I'm back again, determined to catch up with all the LMS novels I'm following before I let myself write mine. I have no idea how I'm going to ...
Jul 23, 2018 -
Re: Swearing off swearing
Hi, Traves! Pan dropping in to review this article. I'll start by saying that this should have an 18+ rating, given that you drop a handful of f-bombs throughout the ...
Jul 22, 2018 -
Re: Vyheria - Chapter 2
Hiya, Sheyren! Sorry it's taken a while to get to this. Review commitments have been piling up, but I'm determined to stay on track. Small Comments Exliana stood on the ...
Jul 23, 2018 -
Re: Black Water: chapter 2
Hiya, dywn! Here to review as promised. It's been quite a while since I read the first chapter, but I glanced over it again just to refresh my memories of ...
Jul 20, 2018 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 43.2
Hiya, Blue! Let's see how our darling Benjamin is holding up. Small Comments She realized they hadn’t eaten since yesterday morning, before heading to the school. It felt even longer ...
Jul 19, 2018 -
Re: The Equator in Zhulong 1.2
Hello, Pompadour! Just dropping in to review the next instalment of this charming story. I'll start by saying that I think this part is much stronger than the last. It's ...
Jul 18, 2018 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 43.1
Hiya, Blue! Let's find out what's happened our lovable idiot orderly. Small Comments Beatrice swooped down beside him and allowed Edna to slide off and kneel stiffly beside them. Not ...
Jul 17, 2018 -
Re: (LMS IV) The Drowner: 2.2
Hiya, Biscuits! Great to see another chapter of this. Small Comments The table juddered noisily. "Hi," said Janet, who had just thudded down onto the chair just round the table ...
Jul 17, 2018 -
Re: Eos, Chapter 2.2: An Unwelcome Visitor
Hiya, Mea! Sorry it's taken me a while to get to this. Now I've got that stupid short story written and submitted, I can finally get back to reviewing. Just ...
Jul 15, 2018 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 42.2
Hiya, Blue! I meant to review this yesterday, but tiredness got the better of me. I did read it, though - how could I not, after that last cliffhanger? Small ...
Jul 11, 2018 -
Re: Vyheria - Chapter 1
Hiya, Sheyren. I critiqued your prologue and I'm wrapped up in all things LMS, so I thought I'd swing by and review your first chapter as well. Like last time, ...
Jul 10, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 19.1: Gael
Hi, Lightsong! While I'm being so organised and diligent with myself, I thought I'd leap in and review this early. I'm always glad to see a new chapter of this. ...
Jul 10, 2018 -
Re: (LMS IV) The Drowner: 2.1
Hiya, Biscuits! Thanks for tagging me. I thought I'd swing by and get a review in early on this. Before I get into the meat of the review, I will ...
Jul 10, 2018 -
Re: The Equator in Zhulong [First Box + 1.1]
Hiya, Pompadour! When I first read your LMS topic for this idea, I was super intrigued, and I read this the moment I saw you'd published it. I'm not going ...
Jul 9, 2018
