Panikos

Hiya, Saen! Several of the LMS writers I was following have dropped out of the competition and Blue's not far off finishing The Chosen Grandma, so I'm in need of ...

Hiya, Blue! Sorry for taking so long to review this, even though I'm pretty sure I read it straight away. I'll catch up with the whole thing before I let ...

Hiya, Lightsong! It's been too long. What better way for me to get back on the #revmo wagon than with this story? Small Comments Other than the part [place?] where ...

Hiya, SofieR! Pan dropping in for a quick review. Because this is such a short piece and it's generally very polished, I'm going to forgo the nitpicking and just give ...

Hiya, Holly! I reviewed chapter two of this so I thought I'd swing by and check out this part as well. I'm going to follow the same formula as last ...

Hiya, Blue! Jumping in with a review. I'm going to do the same thing as last time and just keep my comments general. I guess my main problem with this ...

Hiya, Zoom! Just dropping in to review, as promised. Small Comments The city looked miniscule behind them, though they had not been on the road for long. Nice opening line. ...

Hiya, MJ! Pan dropping in for a quick review. I've not read previous chapters of this, but between your A/N and your thread in the Writers' Corner, I was able ...

Hiya, Cat! Just dropping in to review. I know I haven't critiqued the first chapter, but I've just gone back and read it so that I can follow what's happening ...

Hiya, Elinor! I've not read the other parts of this story, but this has been kicking around in the Green Room for quite some time so I thought I'd drop ...

Hi, Poppy! Happy RevMo. I'm Pan and I'll be frying up a quick review for you today. Usually when I review, I start by combing through the piece for small ...

Hiya, Pompadour. Great to see a new chapter of this - it's been ages! Small Comments pay their respects to the Queen Empress . Minor point, but it seems an ...

Hiya, Blue! Back again. I'm actually going switch up the review formula today and forgo the small comments. I know I love the grammar, but like, this is end-of-first-draft-final-week-of-LMS territory,

Hiya, Sheyren! I'm up to date at last. God bless RevMo. Small Comments After a moment of hesitation, Exliana sighed and reluctantly lowered her hands. Her reluctance is clear from ...

Hiya, Sheyren! Small Comments “Well, this is Nalu, and this is Natu. They’re in the room next to mine, so we’re basically like best friends now .” Kind of a ...