Panikos

Hi 4revgreen! Happy Review Day! I'm a huge fan of the SCP wiki so I was delighted to find this in the Green Room. For the most part, I think ...

Hiya, Gnomish! Happy Review Day! I haven't read any of the previous chapters of this, but it still sucked me in. I was instantly hooked by the idea of Cutting, ...

Hiya, redvictory! Happy Review Day. I haven't read the first chapter of this, but I'll do my best to give you some useful feedback. Starting with the positives, I think ...

Hey Ox! Happy Review Day! I'm crazy about all things dragons, so this intrigued me. Even though I've come in to this story without any context, I'm interested in the ...

Heya, Vent! Happy Review Day. Sorry it took so long to get to this. I think you mentioned that you've shelved this project for now, but I still want to ...

Helloooooo again!! I hecking love Rowan. They're the bees knees and they make me laugh so much. When they called Cassius a rat I was absolutely creasing, especially with their ...

Hi again! I really liked seeing how Ember and Cassius played off against each other in this chapter, seeing as their dynamic is one I haven't see a lot of ...

Hi again! So, this chapter has actually made me remember that I did read the prologue to this story way back when. I remember Margaretta and Jax all taking the ...

Heya, mellifera! I've read the first half of the chapter so I'm up to speed with it. I'm at work right now so I'm writing this ~covertly~ I really liked ...

Hiya! Back again to review the next bit. This felt a lot smoother than the previous chapter, but it might just be because I have a better sense of who ...

Hiya, desieral! Just dropping in for a quick review. I haven't read the story you're analysing in this essay, but I'll do my best to give you feedback on the ...

Heya, mellifera! Just dropping in for a quick review. Small Comments kicking at pebbles with her boot-encased feet This feels kinda awkward. Do you have to mention that she's wearing ...

Hiya, SubSubLibrarian! I think I reviewed a few chapters of this in the past, so I thought I'd drop in and give some feedback on this one. Even though I've ...

Hi Vent! This one is going to be extra short and not super comprehensive, because I've just read the next chapter and reckon that you should jump straight to that ...

Hi Vent! Sorry it's taken such yonks to get to this. I've been stupidly busy. Small Comments She trips over the dog as she grasps for her sleeping bag, and ...