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Re: Nephilim
I really liked this! Dark, seductive, and intriguing, it grasped my attention from the first stanza. Can't wait to read more Always-Writer
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: We All Fall Down
Ummmmmm....not ment for grammer or spelling
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: Junebug
This was very neat. I didn't expect it to end so and that is good. But I would like a little more depthfrom the speakers POV. How does he/she feel ...
Feb 11, 2011 -
Re: A Chance For Hearts
Wow this was some stuff. I really liked the characters. The forshadowing type you used usually gets on my nerves but you use it well here.
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: cigarette smoke
Well. This certainly had some emotion. That's good. I really enjoyed this peice, and wish I could give you a proper review but I'm tierd as Hell. Bye now.
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: Sometimes
You are really good. To put so much feeling into one little part. You didn't use sensory overload and you used real characters. Not the perfect *couldn't think of getting ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: Eulogy of A Dreamer: Sorry Boys!
Oksy this is my critique. It was to short! I'm really starting to fall for the characters Tristan esp. I want more. Please send me a message when you do.
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: O Pandora
Your poem kind of went this way and that. You strayed off of your topic. I liked the last stanza, but this could used some work. Keep Writing
Oct 20, 2010 -
Re: See No Evil, Hear No Evil, Feel No Evil
This is really true. People who ignore the bad shit that happens in the world, ignore half of the world itself. To truly appreciate the light we have to accept ...
Oct 20, 2010 -
Re: When the world finally goes silent
This was really good. I liked it bunches because it flowed well and had an effortless yet serious "air" about it.
Aug 17, 2010 -
Re: A peom of lines
I realy liked this peice. It was raw emotion, and awesomly written. I enjoy reading fiction but this was something real and it cuts down to the brutal honest truth ...
Aug 11, 2010 -
Re: Midnight
Morgan this was awesome. I've already said this, but I love this story! Post more soon.
Aug 11, 2010 -
Re: The Inch - The Full Story - The Final Chapter
Wow. Usualy I'm very critacal, and have a long review, but today my review is just, wow. I loved it and the tragic ending with an inch before their final ...
Aug 8, 2010 -
Re: "Unfortunately... I love you" Chapter 2 (Draft #2)
I realy liked it. There were a couple of dramatical mistakes, but they were pointed out above. I'm not going to repeat them orthis whole review would be a big ...
Jul 21, 2010 -
Re: Alone I Stand: Chapter One
Wow sakin. I really liked this one. Are you going t post more? Tell me if you do.
Jul 20, 2010