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Good job! I love your style, it's easy to relate to it. I really love your choice of name and the overall theme your story gives. I like how you ...

While I understand what your point is, I do have some major topics that just bother me... You say, “All mothers sacrifice tremendously for the good of their children by ...

Pen Again. So I've read this, and the main thing that I want to point out is that in the prologue you say he has black hair. In chapter one, ...

Hiya! Pen here with a review day gift! First off, I want to pick, so here we go. Hero's- in the second sentence, you say 'But not all hero's are ...

Hiya! Pen here with a review for you! First of all, this is good, but what's up with the format? If its a story, why is it not in story ...

I love it, and everything was great. Er, sort of. I did notice this: '“Heath, I don’t understand. What about that lovely girl in Calculus you told us about?” Mom’s ...

This is kind of chilling. I really like it, and since it's tbc, I'm awaiting the next part. I'm really curious as to what's with the oven. And what exactly ...

Okay, I love it. I don't have words for the first part, and I don't remember if I reviewed 18, but oh well. I don't have nitpicks, honestly. I agree ...

I don't have many words for this one, as it's rather filler-ish. We get a lot of information, and I must admit that I like all of the dialogue. I ...

zdjlgBKESPGOJSD I KNEW IT. Oh my lord, I knew it all along. I could tell, oh lord! Lu, you've got me all worked up, I'm so excited that I can't ...

Heyhey! Okay, I love Vivianne. You don't really have to change much, my only major problem was this: "and even longer to realize I wasn’t in 1601 watching my old ...

Okay, so you know how I've loved every single chapter you've put out? Yeah, well, I simply adore this one. I honestly got a few tears. I looooved it, but ...

Okay, first off, Francois is psychotic. Then again, so are Durriken, and Oliver. You did a great job invoking pity and sorrow in this one, I almost wept at the ...

Oh wow! Hi, Raven! This is your first poem? Ah, well good job! I really like it, but there are a few things that bother me, one being the format. ...

Oh, Jeez, Durriken! You cray cray, homeboy. Honestly, Lu, you keep amazing me. You did perfectly as always! I love the changes and thoughts that Sirena experiences, it seems as ...