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Kylan, I thought I'd start by making a quick list of similes/comparisons of any sort- >peaches...like Adam's apples >skin hanging off his bones, like windless sails >underbelly/of the veranda sags ...

Winnie, I enjoyed this poem quite bit. Though it was rather simple and I have little to go by, I'd say you have all the necessities to continue writing good ...

Vanadis, despite your having only started on poetry recently, the fact that you haven't jumped in with a poem that blares with crudeness and lack of thought gives me great ...

Sorry this is a little late... Yeah, I won't do any nitpicks because too may people have gone into those already. Just a few pointers and comments, okay? Firstly, about ...

Hey Gunner! Regardless of whether you support Arsenal, I'm sticking this name on you, okay? I'm not going to go into nitpicks as you'll realise Storm_Bringer's spotted all the little ...

Heather! Really nice to see a poem of your's again. I must say that it's really nice to see a refreshingly simple list poem on here. I enjoyed the conversational ...

Zackster! This is a indeed an evocative poem (not sure about provocative). Your imagery stands out and the treatment to a subject that appears to be not uncommon (at least ...

Zaddie, the indomitable spirit in this poem is very endearing. If you could only preserve this without plunging headfirst into cliches, it would be great. The stubborn defiance of 'my ...

ca va, kool? Just an aside: About the two lines at the end of verse one: I like the association of clouds and fantasy and while you tried to bring ...

Woozey! Great job on making this a very playful poem and yeah, it does have the effect of bringing amusement. This puts me in a fix as to what I ...

Hey Yote Flakes! Well. Well well well. My first prose review since years and I have the nerve to pick this up. This definitely tops your list of experimentations on ...

Heya cyber... I'll get right to business okay? Well, firstly, I know how much a favourite poem really matters to any poet. It is symbolic of your present state, your ...

Good one this, Penelope. I'll try to give some constructive bird-food, but I know how it can be difficult to chop at a favourite. From the very beginning, what struck ...

Bubbah! The theme of the poem, I'm sure you have to not as worn as some theme's but is still a universally experienced one. But there is a huge scope ...

aloha, alohajuice! This here poem was recommended by Miss Mars, and I'm glad I got to it. About the "Vistana" mention-- google only shows it as hotels in Penang, Kuala ...