Paige

By the way, I did make some changes based on your review! Thanks again! (-: Paige

This was definitely a huge help! In a lot of the scenarios where I repeated my choice of words, I was experimenting with some writing tips I read recently, about ...

Thank you so much! I found your critiques to be very helpful and inspiring! I'm looking into extending this piece, so I will definitely edit some things along the way! ...

I didn't notice that. And yes, of course, rap is one of my many talents.

I'm a little late on seeing this, but I thoroughly enjoyed it! I loved the flow of the words especially. Great job!! :)

You were Lovely, and I was Fishy, remember.

Dude. This is absolutely beautiful. I'm considering transferring it to a pretty font and framing it. I entirely adore this piece, and while I considered, I'd never be able to ...

I miraculously remember this. And, I remember what it means. (Courtesy of your explanation, of course, because this is too clever for me to understand on my own.)

thank you :-) maybe I will.

Awwwww (':

this was posted on my birthday :) awww well anyway, this was beautiful!

wow I wrote this as a song maybe I should sing it sometime

wow so sorry I never replied to this thank so much! I enjoyed reading your review! (I never even noticed it, until now!) Sorry about that, but thank you! Much ...

wow so sorry I never replied to this thank so much! I enjoyed reading your review! (I never even noticed it, until now!) Sorry about that, but thank you! Much ...

oh my heavens, you've made me cry! what a beautiful piece. I'm speechless. This is gorgeous. You are amazing. Wow. Just wow. Lovely.