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Hi, I write songs too. Your song is interesting and I liked it. It made me think of how the music would sound accompanied by the lyrics. Anyway, I say ...

Hi! I still haven't finished reading this chapter, but I promise that I will soon finish. I like it so far, but now I have to get to the real ...

:lol: That was really cool. It was funny too. I can't wait to see what happens next. I think you did a really good job. Mario's reaction was pretty odd ...

No, I'm kidding. That was really cool. It kept me thinking... what is wrong them? Leave it to you to use the name Jacob. Anyway, the only errors I saw ...

Yay! It was awesome. It made me really sad, too. I swear I almost cried. Ha ha. Anyway, I think you did a really good job. Leave it to you ...

Hey!! I really like it. The concept is cool and original. And I liked your adjectives. I know, I'm such a dork. Anyway, time to be your critic (I'm your ...

Crap, she pregnant!!! Wow, I really feel bad for her. The Mario and Luigi thing was hilarious. I would feel bad too if my mom named me by a character ...

Hey!! I'm loving the story so far. I can't wait to find out what happens next. I'm really anxious. Anyway, just a tip. In the part that you say the ...

Hey, I think the chapter was really cool and original. All you have to work on is on your grammatical errors, especially with your commas. To help the reader feel ...