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Re: Her Final Destination
The line is supposed to suggest how we all just assume others are fine but thank you for the feedback
Jan 2, 2018 -
Re: The conflict of love
Thanks for the review
Dec 28, 2017 -
Re: The conflict of love
Thank you for the review and I will build on your feedback
Dec 28, 2017 -
Re: Her Final Destination
Maybe just maybe the ending will change. Who knows?
Dec 27, 2017 -
Re: Her Final Destination
I wrote the poem based on the fact a year or so I had a friend who tried to commit suicide luckily we were able to stop it but based ...
Dec 27, 2017 -
Re: You
Wonderful
Dec 27, 2017 -
Re: You
Such simple but beautiful work of art
Dec 27, 2017 -
Re: Mere Mortal
I love this poem I love the idea being portrayed of how love may be different if it were indeed a physical person
Dec 27, 2017
