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This is a heartfelt subject, and you did a good job expressing that. The last line is the best: The people in our cities and in our towns Don't ask ...

First off, I love the subject matter. Change is difficult. I think you captured this eloquently. I don't want a new beginning, because starting a new life is ending the ...

Grammar and punctuation: So here I was, with my much uninspired speech that I clasped firmly in my hand hoping I won’t forget anything. Your tense changes from past to ...

Oh, I would love to hear this put to music! The 'another...' lines are sharp and haunting. "Where the night is never clear, and stars don't feel like shining" is ...

Even when all the worlds decayed, and in neat rows the dead are laid, and among the rows lay You an I, nobody left to mourn or cry. This is ...