OwaisKhand

It is a interesting piece of work bringing the idea of Pokemon that has not been heard of for years into a interesting passage about a Pokemon named Alex although ...

It is an interesting passage and it gives me chills when I read it as you are quite descriptive in your language skills and you keep up the tension by ...

Thanks, that was a really helpful insight into how I can make it better I appreciate that

Thank you, I will work on my grammatical errors

its really good, the cliff-hangers actually make your heart start racing and thinking what is going on and just using character speech as a starter is a really good idea ...