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Re: The Night I lit the sky on fire
You have an eye catching title which hooks the readers I like that And the whole story was detailed and amazing I really liked that Yeah like Logan said just ...
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Re: The Noble Peasant
I like the main story it's funny and historical the same time but one thing to change is it kind of sounded like a this after that story but otherwise ...
Mar 14, 2016 - Re: In the Rain Mar 14, 2016
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Re: Fire!
great storyline I loved reading it but it would be easier to read if you added paragraphs though other than that good work.
Mar 14, 2016 -
Re: Fire!
that is also correct I proud of you
Mar 14, 2016 -
Re: The Wanted and Unwanted
Thank you for the feed back, It's very helpful and I mean it :)
Mar 14, 2016 -
Re: In the Rain
...gud...
Mar 14, 2016 -
Re: In the Rain
good content i like how you went in detail with historical evidence and it was very grim
Mar 1, 2016