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No problem! And I can' t wait to read the next part! (Just a note%uD83D%uDE0F I like Night/Alex the best)

Hello, Stormblessed here! I liked this a lot! The free verse was very well done, as was the haiku. This made me laugh, and I hope you keep writing more ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! This made me laugh! I think you captured Tony and Loki very well as teens. I just wish you would've given us a bit more backstory on ...

Thank you! I would appreciate having more information on how an infection like that works, so I'll definitely PM you.

Thanks for pointing out the typos! I would've thought that I had gotten all of them by now, I've done so much editing. This is a short story, so I'm ...

Thanks for the feedback! (To be honest this is my favorite story I've written so far.%uD83D%uDE01)

Hi! Stormblessed here! Once again, I really enjoyed this story! You wrote it well, though it did feel a bit rushed. I mean, she just met these two people, and ...

Also, Konan has PTSD. I'm not just being dramatic. Whatever happened to him in the Ancient Moon traumatized him so badly that he is mentally broken for a while. Mental ...

Thanks for the feedback! This probably wasn't the best story to post first, as technically, its supposed to be a flashback in a much larger story. By the time you ...

Maybe I just misunderstood %uD83E%uDD37%uD83C%uDFFB%u200D%u2640%uFE0F

I am really enjoying this story so far! This is kind of nitpicking and it's not really important, but it mentions Richard kissing Rachel on the forehead, but how did ...

Thanks for letting me know! This chapter is technically an excerpt from a more complete story. I wrote this first because I wanted some background to spring from, for Konan ...

This story is amazing! The only thing I would correct is your verb tenses. Began instead of begin, answered instead of answers. But otherwise, you mixed Greek mythology and futuristic ...