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Hello, Stormblessed here! The story is definitely coming along! We are assembling our team, and then this story will get going! Not many corrections to make, so good job. You're ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! This was beautiful! Great imagery and description, and your spelling and grammar is great. I really only have a few tips, so heres my two cents. "You ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Great job! I'm really liking these nights at the clubs stories. I just wish there was more worldbuilding, but that's up to you. In regards to story, ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Great chapter! I love time travel stories, and this is definitely keeping my attention. There are a few nitpicks I have besides the ones InconspicuouslyAlpacaing said, but ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Great second chapter! I really didn't find many mistakes, so great job! I can't wait for the next chapter! Here are the mistakes I did find: That's ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! This was a very... fiery first chapter.(pardon the pun.) I'm excited to read the next part! There aren't many errors, but I do have some advice for ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Your writing is getting better! There definitely weren't as many spelling mistakes, so good job! I would still advise reading your writing out loud, as that will ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! This is beautiful! Very well done. The emotion is real, but it balanced with the sarcastic tone of Ben. I really didn't see any spelling or grammar ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! I had been wondering what you were doing with this story. Good to see it's still going! In regards to spelling or grammatical errors, there aren't many. ...

Hello, Stormblessed here with your requested review! This is beautiful. It really made me feel for the author. The imagery is intense and descriptive. Now, I'm no poetry expert, but ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Good continuation! The love triangle is getting interesting. There are less errors here, but I'll point out a few of the ones I did find. “why can’t ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Good continuation! The story is really getting going. There are a lot of errors, but I'll point out a few of them for you. Mainly your problem ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Great chapter, as always! There really isn't much to correct, so I'll just drop my thoughts. First of all, "carer" isn't what you call a person who ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! I enjoyed this segment, as always! Your writing is really improving, and there's not much for me to correct! I'll point out what I did find, then ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Good job on the first chapter. Intriguing storyline, and good descriptions! There are some writing errors, which I'll point out for you. Ok, to start with, names ...