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Re: Edward's Journal
Hi there! I just wanted to let you know that you need to do two reviews before posting anything. keeping a nice two to one ratio of reviews to posts. ...
Jul 28, 2008 -
Re: Mistaken Vendetta
Hi there! I just wanted to let you know that you need to do two reviews before posting anything. keeping a nice two to one ratio of reviews to posts. ...
Jul 28, 2008 -
Re: Kayla--Love
Hi there! I just wanted to let you know that you need to do two reviews before posting anything. keeping a nice two to one ratio of reviews to posts. ...
Jul 23, 2008 -
Re: Sky Dance
Hi there! I just wanted to let you know that you need to do two reviews before posting anything. keeping a nice two to one ratio of reviews to posts. ...
Jul 23, 2008 -
Re: Too much Pain
Hi there! I just wanted to let you know that you need to do two reviews before posting anything. keeping a nice two to one ratio of reviews to posts. ...
Jul 23, 2008 -
Re: idea
Hi there! I just wanted to let you know that you need to do two reviews before posting anything. keeping a nice two to one ratio of reviews to posts. ...
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: When the darkness is your prison
Hi there! I just wanted to let you know that you need to do two reviews before posting anything. keeping a nice two to one ratio of reviews to posts. ...
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: Moonlight Dances In The Water
Moonlight dances in the water, while midnight makes its approach. I love the way that moon light and midnight sound together, I think it works really well here. A draft ...
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: Poem I wrote when I was 12...
Hi there! I see that you have posted two things without doing any reviews at all. I just wanted to let you know that you need to do two reviews ...
Jul 21, 2008 -
Re: Me
Hi there! I just wanted to let you know that you need to do two reviews before posting anything. keeping a nice two to one ratio of reviews to posts. ...
Jul 20, 2008 -
Re: Life
life is something you get once so live it to the fullest everyday as your last some hate it, but there's n reason to I believe you meant "no" here ...
Jul 15, 2008 -
Re: Abortion
I like the basic idea to this piece, however I don’t think it was executed properly. I could go on for a while about why, but others before me have ...
Jul 7, 2008 -
Re: I wish I could change the world
I am sorry to say I agree with Ringo and Niteowl on this one, the whole poem feels so forced to me. Reading a poem should feel like it is ...
Jun 28, 2008 -
Re: Alrite!!!
What on earth was the point of this? To prove to the world of YWS that you cannot spell and grammar is something you never learned? Please correct your spelling ...
Jun 4, 2008 -
Re: LIFE
First things first. You need to do two reviews before posting anything on here, as it clearly states in the rules. We like to keep a 2:1 ratio of reviews ...
May 23, 2008
