SOMETIMES LIFE SCARES ME. IT SCARES ME JUST TO THINK ABOUT HOW THE WAY LIFE WORKS. FOR EXAMPLE BLENDI R.I.P. I REMEMBER THE LAST TIME I SAW HIM HE WAS ALWAYS SMILING AND JUST ENJOYING LIFE TRYING TO ESCAPE THAT PAIN THAT HE SOMEWHAT HAD DEEP INSIDE OF HIM. AND THEN THE NEXT WEEK I COME TO SCHOOL TO FIND OUT THAT HE WAS DEAD. HE PASSED AWAY ON MAY 2, 2008. AND TEHN THE WEEK AFTER THAT HE PASSED AWAY MY COUSIN HAD JUST DIED FROM CANECR. AND I WILL NEVER FORGET THE FIRST TIME THAT I SAW HIM. WHEN I SAW MY COUSIN THE LAST TIME HE WAS ALIVE HE WAS STRONG AND HE WAS TRYING TO FIGHT THE DISEASE THAT HE HAD. AND NOW HE IS GONE. NOONE REALY KNOWS WHEN OR WHERE YOUR LIFE WILL END. IT SCARES ME TO KNOW THAT IN LIFE YOU HAVE TO LIVE UP ALL YOUR DAYS THAT YOU HAVE LEFT OF YOUR LIFE BECAUSE TOMORROW IS NEVER REALLY GARANTEED TO YOU. MY MESSAGE IN THIS IS DON'T TAKE YOUR LIFE FOR GRANTED, EVEN IF YOU SAY THAT YOUR LIFE IS HORRIBLE REMEMBER THAT THERE ARE SO MANY WORSER CASES OUT THERE THEN YOURS.
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