OurManInHavana

Thank you for your feedback. I'm glad you liked it.

Hello there! This was a nice story. The fact that it works as standalone story shows that the writing is good. Of course it is quite difficult to review it ...

Hello there! This is a wonderful poem and I compliment you for writing it. It's simple and elegant and it feels really sincere. The rhyming just flow perfectly. The themes ...

Less is more, and all that.

After rereading my review, I feel like I was maybe a bit too harsh. The story and the writing is good. Just needs a few tweaks here and there.

Hello, Thank you so much for your lengthy and extensive feedback and your kind words. I am glad that you found the story somewhat entertaining. I will perhaps rewrite the ...

This is a fine poem. I don't have much more to say that hasn't already been said. But I would like to make a title suggestion: 'A once bright flower'

Hey! Thank very much for your review. I appreciate it. I've only just started with writing, and, after a few failed attempts, this is the first story I'm somewhat satisfied ...

I like the general idea of the story. There are some grammar issues and a lot of run on sentences. I do believe run on sentences have their place and ...