Oswin

I love poems like this. And even better, it is about a pet peeve of mine! I like how you sort of turned the tables on them, and in a ...

Honestly, this was amazing. If this is a personal experience, I am so sorry. But, this was really descriptive. you should submit it to an anti child abuse website, if ...

also, she knew that her dad wanted to harm her, as he had done before, so she felt that she deserved to be in pain. one of her first childhood ...

thanks very much! i appreciate it

thank you

thank you. i will fix those issue

wow! this was wonderful! i could picture them in my mind perfectly. you should try to add more detail, not drowning it in pictures, still leaving room for the imagination ...

i enjoyed your story. i think you should continue it in mini chronicles, like "part 1" "part 2" etc. try to work more on a backstory. once again, it was ...