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OrabellaAvenue

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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: (the shadow crown book draft) chapter 3

    Hi! This is Orabella, here to review. Yay! There's a new chapter! Unless you already have a stockpile of chapters, you're really fast at writing. (Or at the very least, ...

    Jul 15, 2023
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Humor Re: A Letter to Satan

    Hiya! This is Orabella, here to review. I don't know how to write my reaction to this. The idea is serious and frightening, and yet most of this is very ...

    Jul 13, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: King of the Court - 12

    Hiya! Orabella, here to review. Oooh, this is getting good! I love when we get to see more of different character's thoughts and actions, and how they might justify them ...

    Jul 12, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: yet the nostalgia fails to return me to my past

    Hi. Orabella, here to cry. (Wait, sorry, I mean review.) This is incredibly sad. More than that, really, it's...heart-wrenching. This is the scenario I never want to happen to me, ...

    Jul 12, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: (the shadow crown book draft) chapter 1;2

    Hiya! This is Orabella, here to review. First off, welcome to YWS! I hope you'll enjoy it here, and we're excited to have you! If you ever need anything, don't ...

    Jul 11, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: King of the Court - 11

    Hiya! This is a random weirdo here to review. Oh dear, this isn't looking good. Every time you get a new and important team to play (well almost every time), ...

    Jul 10, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: jade

    Hi! This is a random weirdo here to review. This is a very lovely poem about love, and I totally think you might write a poem right after falling into ...

    Jul 10, 2023
  • Poetry » General, Health Re: Sleep is Hiding

    Hi! This is a random weirdo here to give you a short review. I think this is the shortest poem I've ever read. (At least on YWS) I think I've ...

    Jul 10, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Experiences: Nine

    Hi! This is a random weirdo here to review. First of all, I'd like to say that I'm sorry. I reviewed part four, and said that I'd read the rest ...

    Jul 10, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Purple Stones - Chapter 4

    Hi! This is a random weirdo here to review. Yay! A new chapter is out! Again, I love this series, and I can't wait to read more! (Also, thanks for ...

    Jul 10, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: King of the Court - 10

    Hi! This is a random weirdo here to review. I wonder how Chris knew Copeland's real name? And why Copeland is okay with being called Jeremy now? After making such ...

    Jul 9, 2023
  • Other » General, Realistic Re: Three days

    Hello! This is a random weirdo here to review. This is a very short, very sad story. The title perfectly fits it, and the ending line is bittersweet. The fact ...

    Jul 9, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: King of the Court - 9

    Hi! This is a random weirdo here to review. Oh no!!! Alex!!!!! Is he gonna be okay????!! Well, he probably will be able to play again. Even if it's broken, ...

    Jul 8, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: King of the Court - 8

    Hi! This is a random weirdo, here to review. This is the best chapter yet. I'm not joking. Jer - I mean Copeland's internal dialogue coupled with Ethan's almost made ...

    Jul 6, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Film, Mystery / Suspense Re: Many Perspectives(S1, ep1)

    Hello! This is a random weirdo here to review. Ooh, a new story! Now this is interesting. I wonder why this is called Many Perspectives? Perhaps Katy is not the ...

    Jul 5, 2023


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