OptimismUnderRain

the Italicized words were song titles. :) thanks for the review, i'll be sure to review for the mistakes.

thanks kace... and I picked up on the subliminal message...

ok, fixed the little dumb mistakes. thanks for the reviews :D

Thanks for the comments :) means a lot. yeah that part was a little fuzzy to me too. But in my eyes i saw it as when others doubt you, ...

Amazing! i liked everything about it. You used very strong vocab, had vivid imagery, and had an incredible structure. A very grim mood, but I found it entertaining.

I really like this. It's all completely true as well. My favorite line is There is no worries and no fears, no doubts no tears