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This is really good. I read it over and over, trying to find out the meaning, but I cannot find one. And that's why I love it. It's very emotional. ...

This is a really clever idea, how you compared it to Mean Girls. There are a couple of spelling errors, though. You said "Jasy" instead of "Jady." Also, when it ...

This is very, very amazing. You are extremely talented. My favorite is the third paragraph, about the porcelain bowl. Describing such a foul thing and turning into a beautiful paragraph ...

This was a very good story. It left me wanting more. There were a couple errors, though. "Her breathing was PAINFUL and all but NON-EXISTENT." Two spelling errors in that ...

This really wasn't very clear and the grammar needs to be fixed a lot... for example, "AN Adventure to A New Home" not "A adventure ...". There were some of ...

Wow! This was amazing. I loved the way you made the woman so mysterious and... well, crazy. The way she told the story was chilling, and the ending really left ...

This was really good! I really love the idea, and this story definitely has a lot of potential. Please continue, I will definitely be reading more. The grammar was perfect, ...