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Yes please! I'm definitely interested, and you have such a way with words

This reminds me of our conversation with me naming that sorcerer in my prologue! I think what differs here (and what I believe agrees with not naming Dega) is that ...

So, I've been thinking about Dega! He is pretty cliche (and not the only cliche part here) and I think it's not a great thing to funnel western cliches into ...

Whoops I realize this sounds like I didn't like this chapter but I really did whoops

In the Hands of Six :P what if i say im a meh writer? XD

HIIII CARINA so okay yeah this was thick with Doctor Strange-magic-stuff and will continue to do so until we get to Chapter 1. This setup is very magical in its ...

U do u gurl haha

Sooo, we talked about this a bit on wfp, but I think an idea to keep this going (and not make it so noticeable in the future) is to keep ...

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I have made revisions based on your suggestions! They were very helpful and I hope that, if you have a chance, you could skim over and tell me your thoughts ...

HI SOUND YES SOME HECKIN OKAY MARVEL FANFICTION IS HERE Okay, so the gauntlet acts as a storage device for the Infinity Stones. The power lies in the stones and ...

AHHHH Thank you so much for your review Biscuits! Your nitpicks help out quite a bit, as I don't really revise my work before publishing it (as I'll get into ...

how? ;)

So, looking back on it (gosh, 2012 me was so weird what is this review) I belieeeeve what I was trying to say was that a lot of exposition is ...

This may help!