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Yo, mmbmio! So, I checked a bit, and I couldn't find a Chapter 1 to this. I'll look after more thoroughly, but for now I'm just gonna review this chapter ...

Hey intra! Here we are, at the last of the prologues. Alright, let's get right into it. Cyra woke to a world of fire and light. A searing white scorched ...

Yo, intrastellar! I didn't quite get to this before Review Day, so I guess I'm now reviewing this for Review Day. Go Team Instinct haha So in some of my ...

Yo intra! I'm gonna continue with these prologues until I'm finished with them all and finally caught up. I'm quite excited, are you? Anyway, let's get right into this! Alek ...

Yo, intrastellars! So, you have a total of four different prologue parts, which I have to say it quite a lot. I'll try my hardest to get through them. This ...

Good morning, pastelqueen! My name's Jhinx and I'm here to provide some critique and insight to your story. So, let's get started! I find the inevitability of Death a comforting ...

Hey intrastellar! (cool name btw xD) My name's Jhinx and I'm gonna try to give you some hopefully constructive critiques to better help your story. I understand that you've actually ...

Hey moonpolice! First off nice username xD and welcome to YWS So this is the first chapter I’m reading so if I miss things I’m sorry. I’m also reviewing this ...

Yo Adrian, good morning ^^ (shh it’s morning for me, I’m always asleep). Alrighty, I’m here to review this for you because you need more me in your writing life. ...

Yo, Hatt. I’ve never reviewed something of yours. However, I noticed this I want to lay out of a couple of disclaimers before I start this review. One: I don’t ...

Mem, I’m here for the final chapter that you’ve written. Goodness it’s been nine whole chapters already. I’m excited! Are you? I am hehe The usual disclaimers apply. I’m actually ...

Mem

Memmm! I’m here to review again because I wanted to dive straight into Chapter Eight because I hope it’s going to be a good chapter. Let’s look into it, then! ...

Hey Mem, It’s Omnom here to review again. I’ve had time to think and now I’m doing this review. I hope you’ve strapped on, because here we go! The usual ...

Hey Mem, I’m here to review the sixth chapter for you! I’m doing this in class right now, because who needs government? The usual disclaimers still apply. So, let’s delve ...