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  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Writhing

    Good morning, Kazey! So, I'm not the best at reviewing poetry, but I will attempt my hand at this. I do apologize if this is a terrible review :/ Anyway, ...

    Sep 1, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Heroes of Aldrizhon (Chapter V and VI)

    Good morning, yiz. I'm trying to catch up here so another review is in order. Hopefully my past reviews have helped. Let's dive right in. Chapter 5 The path to ...

    Sep 1, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Heroes of Aldrizhon (Chapter II, III & IV)

    Yo yiz, here to review for the next part. This is just going to be my thoughts about what's going on, and won't be as detailed as my last review. ...

    Aug 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Heroes of Aldrizhon (Prologue & Chapter 1)

    Alrighty, I do apologize for this being such a late review. You asked for this 20 days ago! I've just been busy. However, without further ado, let's get right into ...

    Aug 22, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Automaton's Heart: Chapter 1

    Yo Mage! I saw that you're doing a story and couldn't help myself. So, here I am to review. Some disclaimers: I don't read any previous reviews, so please pardon ...

    Aug 1, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Operation REJECT: Chapter 1

    Yo, Lazy! Jhinx here to review your work. First of all, welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here. So, this review will only pick up on some glaring ...

    Aug 1, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: A Rift Between Magi: Chapter 1

    Yo Anadir! Happy Review Day! So, I just reviewed your third chapter. Yes, I'm reading them out of order haha. However, this review is going to be my fourth star! ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: A Rift Between Magi: Chapter 3

    Yo Anadir! Happy Review Day! I haven't read the other two chapters yet, but I just wanted to give you a quality (at least in my opinion) Green Room review. ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic Re: 'When I Think Of You' - Chapter 4

    Yo! Happy Review Day! Alright Braiden, it's time for the final chapter (so far), and the reason why I was reviewing the rest of the chapters. Chapter 4! Let's dive ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic Re: 'When I Think Of You' - Chapter 3

    Yo, Braiden! Happy Review Day! Time to dig through Chapter three. Hopefully we'll get to chapter four soon! Let's dive right in. "You've got to be kidding me." Nice beginning! ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic Re: 'When I Think Of You' - Chapter 2

    Yo, Braiden! I'm back to review Chapter 2. With luck, I'll get to Chapter 4 soon! Let's get right into it. I looked up towards the top of the tree, ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic Re: 'When I Think Of You' - Chapter 1

    Yo Braiden! Happy Review Day. I saw you on Team Mystic saying that Chapter 4 of this story is still in the Green Room, so I'm gonna make my way ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: The Golden Flame - Chapter 2: Mr.Nobody

    Yo Loz, back here to review the second chapter. I understand there were some rough patches in chapter on. Let's hope that this chapter is different. The same disclaimers apply. ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: The Golden Flame - Chapter 1: Curiosity killed the cat

    Yo Loz, Happy Review Day! I'm gonna get through both this and your second chapter, hopefully providing you with some helpful nitpicks and critiques. Some disclaimers: Please don't take anything ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Short Story » Satire, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Offing

    Yo, Gatherer! Happy Review Day, and a late welcome to YWS! So, a few disclaimers before I begin. First of all, this is all just my opinion. Don't take it ...

    Jul 31, 2016


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