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I did that with another story I wrote, but then people took one look at the poem and didn't want to read the rest. Again, thanks!

I was under a time limit, so I kinda rushed it towards teh end, but thanks again! :)

Haha, thanks. The bolded words are direct quotes from the poem I based this off of. :)

Thanks, I appreciate it. :) and yeah, I really should have proofread this before posting...

Haha, sorry about the confusion with the bolded words, I probably should have put this page in as part 1. But thanks again for your time, effort, and honest opinion. ...

Thanks. I knew this piece had holes in it when I was writing, but I wasn't sure how to fill them. This sure helps. :)

Well that's good to hear, I thought the opening was rather bland... I wrote all this under a time limit, so you're right in saying that I'm missing things, character ...

Haha, I've only ever seen the movie for Beautiful Creatures (...I thought it was weird... :P) and I'd like to get into doctor who but I am without Netflix. But ...

Haha, and your picture looks like your a Doctor Who fan too! Lol. :)

Thanks, I'll work on that! :)

I'm sorry, but I didn't write the poem..... someone named Frank Gaspar did... :P

Ok, that's makes sense, thanks!

Thanks for the review! If I ever feel the desire to edit this story, I'll definitely work on transitions. :)

The purpose of referencing to Annie at the beginning was meant to inspire curiosity in the reader to entice them to read on, it wasn't supposed to be confusing, but ...

That's good to hear, I was worried nobody would notice how the poem and short story were related. :P