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  • Poetry » General, General Re: we are not/we are

    Wow! Let me just say that I am a big fan of your poetry and this was no exception. I really liked all of the fish comparisons sprinkled throughout the ...

    Jul 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Satire, Romantic Re: Mirrors

    Wow this was a strange and powerful piece! The second stanza is my favorite, I can totally picture a crazed drunkard smashing their reflection in the mirror. The last three ...

    Mar 26, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Thoughts of a Used Juice Box

    Like a previous reviewer said, I was anticipating a humorous poem based on the title. So, it was all the more shocking, when this poem turned out to be very ...

    Mar 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Spiritual Re: Rhapsodic

    Let me start off by saying that I adore this poem. It is one of the most calming, peaceful and beautiful things I have ever read. As someone pointed out ...

    Mar 24, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Beauty I've been told

    This was a lovely poem! While I expected it to be just fluffy and romantic it took a tragic turn in the last stanza which was unexpected. My favorite lines ...

    Mar 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Storyteller

    Hello! I really enjoyed this poem. The last stanza was definitely my favorite. In the third stanza I believe there is a typo (I'm assuming you meant "where" not "were"). ...

    Mar 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Health Re: You look like gold to me

    I like how heartfelt an genuine this poem felt. I also liked the comparisons to different types of metals throughout the poem. It made this poem seem different than others ...

    Mar 22, 2013


seagulls are bad sea chickens with no sense of humanity
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