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  • Poetry » General, General Re: we are not/we are

    Wow! Let me just say that I am a big fan of your poetry and this was no exception. I really liked all of the fish comparisons sprinkled throughout the ...

    Jul 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Satire, Romantic Re: Mirrors

    Wow this was a strange and powerful piece! The second stanza is my favorite, I can totally picture a crazed drunkard smashing their reflection in the mirror. The last three ...

    Mar 26, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Thoughts of a Used Juice Box

    Like a previous reviewer said, I was anticipating a humorous poem based on the title. So, it was all the more shocking, when this poem turned out to be very ...

    Mar 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Spiritual Re: Rhapsodic

    Let me start off by saying that I adore this poem. It is one of the most calming, peaceful and beautiful things I have ever read. As someone pointed out ...

    Mar 24, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Beauty I've been told

    This was a lovely poem! While I expected it to be just fluffy and romantic it took a tragic turn in the last stanza which was unexpected. My favorite lines ...

    Mar 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Storyteller

    Hello! I really enjoyed this poem. The last stanza was definitely my favorite. In the third stanza I believe there is a typo (I'm assuming you meant "where" not "were"). ...

    Mar 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Health Re: You look like gold to me

    I like how heartfelt an genuine this poem felt. I also liked the comparisons to different types of metals throughout the poem. It made this poem seem different than others ...

    Mar 22, 2013


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