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SUSHI! You're comments are always loved as usual. I love Alys too. She is so fun to write! I always seem to fall in love with a less important character. ...

Thanks for your review - you have NO idea how much I appreciate it. I totally see the prison thing and how I haven't explained that they just wander around, ...

Thanks! I totally see the 'handle of' thing. It must be fixed! She's so strong because she's an Angel - guess I could kinda make that a little clearer. And ...

I just remembered! I totally did read the first chapter of this. I will have to get around to reading the others. :)

Thank you :)

Thank you! So glad you enjoyed it. I really loved your idea about pointing out the contrast of her light to the dark. I've added it in. I will message ...

Thank you :)

Thanks Robbie :) it's for a competition! Write a short story based on a song that's given to you. Mine was Safe and Sound by Taylor Swift. Fingers crossed it ...

No offence taken :) I'm a tough cookie! & I always want to improve so your comments are greatly appreciated. THANKS! Will defo let you know when the new version ...

Thank you! You have been more than helpful. I've made amendments :) Will let you know when the next entry is up! Olive

This is a good point! I've never done a prologue without a character before. I could maybe put a small profiling at the end introducing who is actually find out ...

I was going to review this piece but now I feel that any of what I say will be useless!

Thanks! I've posted on your wall :)

Thanks! I've posted on your wall. :)

Hi there, So I liked your concept & I like that she feels as too many people in the town are called 'Jane'. You can do a lot with this! ...