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Re: Mentality of a dangerous mafia.
thanks people except for the two that were 1) harsh and 2) said everything the first one said constructive critique was never meant to heart warming, yet never meant to ...
Apr 13, 2008 -
Re: His Fool
*whistles* i can feel the emotion emanating from the poem XD you do well in expressing your thoughts and feelings through poetry. keep it up =)
Mar 31, 2008 -
Re: Pain from affection.
forgot to mention its free verse. i'm not particularly into following a fixed rhythm. i just put my thoughts on paper in the best way possible. but i will definitely ...
Mar 13, 2008 -
Re: You
i agree with the comment about shivers. Its very cliche at this point. However, for the rest of the poem is well written i love how you bring it to ...
Mar 12, 2008 -
Re: What i was, and who i am.
There.
Mar 12, 2008