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Thank you very much! You've been very helpful. I've changed all of the poems now so they appear as screen-shots. I squeezed in the "(I think)" as a play on ...

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Hello! Thank you very much. I agree imagery in general is something I flinch away from; I always feel like I'm being cheesy. Despite this, of course it's an important ...

Hello! Thank you for the review, it was really helpful. I definitely agree about the formatting. I struggled to put gaps in between the stanzas and all of the lines ...

Hello! Thank you for the review! I really enjoyed your view on things. I hadn't noticed the repetition of above us before and I shall definitely edit that. "So numberless ...

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Hello LeutnantSchweinehund! (Love the name by the way) I really really appreciate you trying to help me, and I agree some people are too kind on this website, but I ...

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Thank you so much for the review! I'm so glad you like it. Below I have explained my choices in format. I thought of this as being in ternary form ...