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It's not really a poem, but more of a song, but I understand that you thought there should be full stops :) my lyrics never tend to use full stops, ...

Thank you for such kind words ^.^

No, I didn't find any of it offending. The stucture of this song is based on Green Day's 'Whatsername', and so there is four lines in the song that are ...

Yeah, I understand. BUT, may I just say, I'm female, so I didn't write this about a girl (as I am NOT a lesbian :P). I wrote it for my ...

Yeah, um, the crying at the funeral part isn't actually part of the chorus... it's actually in the second verse. The school computers keep mucking it up, so I don't ...

This was amazing. It was, for me, like reading something from Hollyoaks, when a woman talks to the guy at the bar, explaining why she's there, why she hates her ...

This is really good! I like how you explain the evils of the world, once you take away all the beautiful things. The sad thing is that the world has ...

Woah, dude, this is really good. If you continued the story and made it into a book, I'd read it, definitely! It sounds like a fantasy/teenage book, which would be ...

thanks for the comment! yeah, it is coming from a depressed teenager, because at the time I wrote this, that's how I felt. After about six months, I moved in ...

Wow, this is amazing! I can't wait to read what happens next, when the eldest son comes back for his revenge. Keep going, and good luck!

Wow, this is amazing! This is, quite literally, the best poem I have ever read. Honestly, I am not kidding! Keep at it, because great things will happen if you ...