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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Joy Ride

    Hey there. Alright, so stylistically, this poem is refreshing- it's a nice change in style from your norm g1ldv so bravo my friend! With that, I'm going to go pretty ...

    May 5, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Broken Home

    The frustration and anger really comes across in your poem. Your diction is powerful and provocative-so kudos to you there! The structure of your poem is kind of a double-edged ...

    May 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Culture, Spiritual Re: Terrorism has no religion

    Wow, this piece was moving to read. I loved everything about your writing. It serves almost as a unifying movement aginst terrorism. The poem has a very catchy meter; its ...

    Apr 8, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: My Human

    Oh, man. This poem broke my heart into a million pieces, and I am so, very sorry for your loss. With that, here's my review. First off, the perspective you ...

    Apr 6, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Void

    Hey cuz, Here's my two cents on this piece. First of all it's ballsy: and I like it. This poem was obviously written after some serious introspection and soul searching. ...

    Apr 6, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: All you ever want

    I could connect to this on so many levels as a high school student. First of all, the anaphora you use throughout the poem is extremely effective. It hammers the ...

    Apr 1, 2016


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