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It's a good poem, funny and tells a message. It rhymes which is nice. I like how the words are simple and make it easy to read. It's understandable enough ...

I love how it's not too indepth, but enough to were we get good imagery. I like the use of light,sun, warmth, and hot. They're all different words. However you ...

For starters I love this poem, it's relatable. Also the "homemade daughter" in your title made me wanna read it. I like the wording and the way you spaced it ...