Nyx

Hey there, Thank you so much WaitingForLife! The comments you have made have been documented and I have changed them in my personal file. (I don't really want to change ...

Hey there, Thanks for the review, I agree about the paragraph and shall change that now :) And to answer your question the emotion is loneliness, and I think that's ...

Hey there, Not going to review, but I think that this story is so sweet from a five year old :)

Hey there, Thanks for that comment, i realized after i posted it that there were problems with it, but that's what you get for writing it at midnight right? :D ...

Hey there, Thank you so much for all of your comments! They have been noted and i will change them as soon as i have more than a few moments ...

Hey, Overall I thought it was a good piece. I think the others have pointed out most of the things I would say.Except you could put more details into the ...

Hey there, I love this piece, you have really done a good job with the Old English writing, and overall i think it is a really good piece. Keep writing ...

Hey, I really loved this piece, the whole setting really gets your attention when you start reading it. I think the emotions you used really bring across the intensity of ...

Hey, I thought it was a great piece, i just don't like the father by the end of the story, but it is a really good story even if the ...