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Re: Losing the Talent to Write
And I can feel its mark And I can feel it's mark Fiction >.> No apostrophe. Litehawk had it right. XD However, I do not think you have lost any ...
Feb 13, 2010 -
Re: Dr. Nutty [Episode 1] *PREVIEW*
I'm a doctor? =P kidding. Hrmm. There isn't much to go off here, but it sounds like it could be amusing. Try not to try *too* hard to make it ...
Jan 14, 2010 -
Re: Couples' Weekend (Chapter One)
Ohai! =D Ooooh. I sense trouble brewing. Well, the kind of trouble that her mum wouldn't like to hear about, not sure if it will bother them. =P The school ...
Dec 27, 2009 -
Re: Moonlight
July! Welcome to YWS! =D I hope you have fun here. ^^ Now, I have to tell you- I don't know anything about poems. I'm a story kind of person, ...
Dec 25, 2009 -
Re: Ace of Hearts
Welcome to YWS! =D I hope you make yourself at home, here. After reading your story, I think you could fit right in. ^^ By that, I mean that your ...
Dec 13, 2009 -
Re: Oracle of Life 1 part 1
Hey! Welcome to YWS! =D I see you've already done reviews. Awesome. No, really. It's great to see. ^^ Okay, the first thing I must say about your charming story ...
Dec 13, 2009 -
Re: The man with Killer Eyes
Hey, Pen. ^^ not entirely sure if this is the story you linked me to, my net died as I clicked on it. D= If it's not, PM me or ...
Dec 11, 2009 -
Re: Lorikeet, I Wished.
Pengu =D It's a short peice, as Mat has already pointed out, and the characters are not very distinct. But I love the way the story of the parrot is ...
Dec 11, 2009 -
Re: Gods Of Fate- Prologue
Hey, Nutty here. This is the first work of yours I have read, and from what I can tell from this short peice, I would enjoy reading your writing style. ...
Dec 11, 2009 -
Re: I've Been Meaning to Tell You
Hey ^_^ Now, I'm not the biggest romance buff, but I've read a few. I spotted this and thought I would point a few things out. It's short and sweet, ...
Dec 11, 2009 -
Re: Dreaming.
Hi! Welcome to YWS. ^^ I squinted my eyes, the rays of light almost blinding me. I looked around, realizing that there was absolutely nothing surrounding me. These two lines ...
Jul 23, 2009 -
Re: black heart of fire
Hey Christine! Nutty here. I just read your story, and it seems to be you are bursting with ideas. That's good. But what you should be wary of is jumping ...
Jul 2, 2009 -
Re: A Break from Routine
Hey Jester! Getting my first review in two months, hopefully I'm still up to the task. They are all rushed, and irritation burns in their eyes, as they are drawn ...
Jul 2, 2009 -
Re: Tales of a Kingdom
Greetings, Epenguin! ^^ First off, I am impressed. I understood what was going on the whole time, and saw only a few grammar mistakes, and other minor faults. Traveling refugees ...
May 4, 2009 -
Re: high school drama
Hey there Aundreea! Welcome to YWS. I suggest you make your way to the welcome forum at some stage- there is a wonderful team of greeters in the blue names ...
May 1, 2009
