Nutty

Hey sheperd This is interesting, though not strictly captivating. Usually short stories have something to say, and all I can read into this one is one person on the street ...

You have an interesting prologue here, and I am never quite sure how to review prologues. Grammar and sentence structure: Seemed fine, though you may want to mix up your ...

Hey XchangeX! Mmmm. First novels. I have to say, I already prefer this one to your other one, funnily enough. It's not so generic, and we already know a little ...

Oooh, interesting. I've been reading a lot about death on YWS lately, it's kind of concerning. This one is quite interesting, and overall, I liked it. The format and flow ...

Hey Geneve ^^ This story...well, series of diary entries is short and sweet, and hold up quite well on their own. I like the flow you have created, and the ...

hey Gillian, the first thing I noticed was the formatting. You should try breaking up the wall of text a bit, you know? Sky tried speaking to Sophie this morning ...

Hi charlotte, I'm Nutty, but you can call me Chey if you like. Wow, I didn't realise until I looked up the top how young you were! You're pretty good ...

This is... interesting. Is it a stand alone or a one-shot? In his lap he held a book with both hands clutched on either side and a cane to his ...

Okay, first off, I didn't see the words 'summer romance' there at all. If I missed it, then I would assume you are from the southern hemisphere and just forgot ...

Hey, I quite enjoyed this. First comment, however, is you don't have to censor yourself in literary works. I would say either leave the word uncensored or get rid of ...

Hey XchangeX Pain. Burning, searing pain crept it's way through my now violated veins. Okay, first thing I noticed was the misplaced apostrophe. I suggest you go and read this ...

This is very moving, and I hope for your sake it isn't true. The subject of the piece is very emotional, but the narrator is not. It creats a shocked, ...

Pengu =O I can't review poems, but. You obviously got people thinking. I think this means it is successful. >.> I see an image of a woman looking at a ...

I stared at the scene before me . I stared at the blood seeping across the ground towards me. I knew that they would be coming soon but I couldn’t ...

Hey snoink ^^ Interesting idea, I haven't read a subclass story in a while. I don't really have a real picture of what 'freaks' are yet. I guess that's because ...