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Re: Oblivious Hearts: Chapter 3
It was amazing. I was lost when I started but it eventually came together in the end. I loved how you detailed it but not too much to leave us ...
Jul 5, 2012 -
Re: Us and Them
A good explanation about history and cultures in a poem. You worded it right with good precision. It gave you the sense of anger and did rhyme a little bit. ...
Jul 4, 2012 -
Re: Mine
Its a nice, well flowing piece. Beautiful in all ways you can think of. It created imagery. It was a smooth rhythm. A little bit off but not noticeably off.
Jul 1, 2012 -
Re: Country Mouse Chapter 1
I loved how you started it out. I cant wait to read more. It sounds like the type of story that will just get better and better but right now ...
Jul 1, 2012 -
Re: woman
You have set up a nice, touching, simple poem. I understand it really well me being a women and all. I see that you have made a young girl getting ...
Jul 1, 2012